Five Rules for Yes
 Chapter 1 of 4

Five Rules for Yes Chapter 1 of 4

Sara Anne's World Crumbles Then Rises from the Ashes

By

Donald Mallord

TAGS: coming of age, small town, first time, slow burn romance, older neighbor, revenge, therapy, age gap, betrayal, eighteenth birthday

Copyright © 2026 Donald Mallord. All rights reserved.

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Author's Notes

Contents: parental infidelity, depiction of group sex, all explicit acts are between 18+, betrayal, cussing, and trauma around a father's violent death, and elder-teen sex.

I'd like to acknowledge Duil2 for volunteer editing assistance and recommending changes, which allowed it to be accepted by Lit for publication.

'Five Rules for Yes' follows Sara Anne Willows, a West Texas redhead, who learns the hard way that "yes" can bless you, break you, or change everything. Her eighteenth birthday goes off the rails, with a neighbor old enough to know better, and a mama who should've had her back. What comes after is a cuss‑filled climb out: bad choices, better therapy, and the first time Sara starts saying "yes" for herself instead of everyone else.

Out of the wreck, she writes five rules for saying "yes"--the kind that turn a girl's first time from something done to her into the start of the life she claims as her own.

It's told in plainspoken, West Texas English, and yes, you're in for some heavy cussin', rough edges, and a stubborn streak of hope.

Introduction

Out in West Texas, the blazing sun finds every crack you've got--roads, houses, hearts--and widens them. Out here, an eighteenth birthday can split a life clean in two.

This is a tough land where a girl learns fast who holds power over her and when it's safe to say "yes"--and if she doesn't, she learns the cost.

Sara Anne Willows--Saw to her friends--is one week from grown, standing at the ragged edge between her mother's rules and the big-girl things she's only heard whispered in locker rooms.

She needs school service hours, and Mr. Randy next door needs help. He lost his Mary two years ago, and still hasn't found his way back into the world.

Saw still thinks a "yes" is just good manners. Not something a man old enough to be her grandfather, or a boy her own age with a pocket full of condoms, might turn into a weapon.

What the Hell Girl

A forgotten report card, and misplaced paperwork, send Sara scrambling to lock in the community service hours she needs for school, which lands her helping a widowed neighbor, Mr. Randy. What starts as checking a graduation box quietly suggests that his house runs on a different set of rules than the ones she grew up with.

"Ain't right to have to get up this early in the summer," Sara Anne moaned to the redhead staring back at her in the bathroom mirror.

Her curls had done that overnight explosion thing again, a Copper Brillo pad gone rogue. One coil kinked straight up like it had a smart mouth of its own. She tugged it down, watched it spring right back, and snorted.

"Could you behave? For like, one week?" she muttered at her mirror image. "Birthdays, school pictures, my whole damned life. Eighteenth birthday is just around the corner, and you look like 'Orphan Annie' with heatstroke. Why is it that boys at school only see tits and ass?" she asked the girl in the mirror. "Never my face first?"

She sucked in her stomach on reflex, not that there was much to suck in, then rolled her eyes at herself. The baby‑blue eyes everybody went on about looked too big in the morning, like she'd borrowed them off a doll.

"You look like trouble," she told her reflection, half proud, half wishin' she could trade in about ten percent of the curves, for ten percent less attention.

Below the mirror's edge, her bra strap had slipped, the cheap elastic carving a faint groove into her skin. The half‑cup pushed her breasts up higher than felt natural, like they were on sale in a store window.

At school, the boys' eyes lived about ten inches lower than her face. Their whispers had gotten more creative since junior year, too.

"They see Barbie," she told the mirror under her breath. "You and me know better."

She sucked her belly in again. Turned sideways, she checked the curve of hip-to-waist the way her girlfriends did in locker‑room mirrors. Her ass... Mama called it her bubble butt... left practically nothing to the imagination in the outfit she borrowed from her mama.

Men see that first, she thought, not without a flicker of mean pride. Then they decide what kind of girl you must be.

"Sara Anne!" Mama's sharp yell broke her consultant session with the mirror. "What the hell, girl...?"

"Suuugar, what the frick did I forget now?"

Sue Ellen, her mama, stood there by the toaster, papers raised in her hand as Sara rounded the corner.

"I've been waitin' fer this report card fer two weeks to get here in the mail... and it's stuck behind the damned toaster?"

"Mama, I lost track of where I put that... " Sara Anne began.

"All... A's... and what's this A minus in biology?" Mama Sue mused.

Sara Anne shrugged. "I forgot to turn in a paper on human sexual reproduction."

"That ain't all ya forgot. What's this other stuff?" Sue Ellen held up and shook what seemed to be half a ream of papers.

The redhead's curly locks bounced over her brow as her eyes widened. "Oh! Crap to do fer the summer, like... frickin' community hours."

Sue Ellen sped through the mountain of papers. "Shit girl. Yer two weeks behind. Sara Anne, you've gotta get a move on, girl. Summer's moving fast, Sara, and you haven't done any of those damned hours yet."

" I will, Mama. I'll... start today!" Hands on her hips, Sara Anne huffed, not loud enough to be disrespectful, just in response to Sue Ellen's plea to get a move on in life.

This summer, life for Sara Anne revolved around getting college-ready and getting those extracurricular activities on paper to present a well-rounded student appeal. School counselors all seemed to think community service was needed to get a college to accept kids wantin' a secondary education.

For Sara, the horizon was nursing school, or maybe pharmaceuticals, or perhaps her destiny would be... a teacher? Counselors thought so... mama's savings account said different.

It was unlikely to be the last one. Somehow, she didn't think she wanted to spend her life teaching kids like herself. Knowing she'd be facing rows of desks with boys fantasizing about her, on her knees, and salivating over their first sense of getting some sex.

"Sure, baby girl, today fer sure. You can't get ahead in life battin' those baby blues and thinkin' they'll get you good grades."

"Mama, you know I study hard! And...," she added more softly. "I can't help that I got baby blues. Those came from you and... "

Her voice halted at that point, choked a bit, knowin' puttin' "Daddy" in that reply would've sparked a spat, again. She turned, lettin' the words drift away.

Genes and family history had given that perfectly filled out young girl's frame those crystalline azure eyes.

Saw was the only one in school like that-red, that is. Not the box‑dyed, copper‑when-the-light-hits-it kind, but true carrot‑top curls and lashes so pale you couldn't see 'em 'til she blinked. Mixin' fiery red curls, sparklin' blue eyes, and an hourglass figure was always gonna be a source of sexual distraction and talk.

A few more days and she'd be eighteen, before school started up again fer her senior year. By most standards, she'd be an adult. Still homebound until she finished high school, of course, but almost emancipated and nearly able to make decisions on her own... almost.

Still standin' face-to -face in the kitchen with her mama, Sue Ellen, Saw pursed her lips and thought about those hours.

"Maybe... you think I could count some of that time helpin' out Mr. Randy next door?"

Mr. Randy was really Mr. Randall Blake, but nobody called him that. In West Texas, you only got the Mister-plus-first-name treatment if folks were close enough to care but still minded their manners.

Sue Ellen's face mirrored her daughter's pursed lips as she rolled her eyes. Sue said, "Baby, call the school counselors before they leave for summer, and find out."

Saw just heard her mama mumble under her breath as she turned back to the sink with a sigh. "How the fuck is helpin' the old codger next door gonna get you credit? It's supposed to be community services, not fuckin' lawn mowin'"

Snatchin' up her early-version iPhone from the charging station, a relic left by her dad, and ignoring her mother's remark, Saw announced, "Hey Siri, call school... on speaker." It was about the only thing her phone could handle well, this far out in God's country.

"Calling school... work, on speaker." Siri's eternally cheerful voice rang out.

"Hey, Mrs. P, are the counselors still workin'?"

"Yes, sweetie, I'll transfer you... hold on, darlin'."

Sue Ellen listened in to the speaker call as she made lunch--egg salad sandwiches with olives and a few torn cilantro leaves, a little Tex Mex snap she'd picked up from years of church potlucks and Friday night suppers after the home games.

"Counseling office, Mrs. Baker. How may I help?"

"Hey, it's me, Mrs. B, Saw. Got a question on service hours... "

"Shoot, girl."

"Well, I have a neighbor who lost his wife a couple of years ago. I was wonderin' if I kinda helped him out some this summer. Could I count that as service hours?"

"Sure, Saw, it's no different than workin' at the hospital as a candy striper, or puttin' hours in at the senior center. You need to document the time and what you did, and of course, get his consent to use it as service hours. Gal, you gotta be up front about your purpose... or he could mistake yer interest fer help... as somethin' else."

Saw missed the innuendo, lifted her hands to the heavens, and shot her mama a smug look.

Sue Ellen just shook her head and smiled back.

"Thanks, Mrs. B. I'll keep track!"

"See?" She beamed, hittin' the end button on her iPhone. "Houston, mission accomplished."

"Accomplished... when you get Mr. Randy's permission and actually put in the time. Meanwhile, how about gettin' the mail?"

First community hours, then doubtful college, but maybe. Then the rest of her life. She said yes without even thinkin'--not knowin' that was how all trouble usually started.

"On it!" Saw said, bouncin' her bubble butt outta her chair.

The kitchen tile was cool under her bare feet, goosebumps prickling up her calves as the air‑conditioner kicked on. There was always a moment, walkin' through the house half‑dressed, when she felt both invisible and too on display at the same time.

"Not like that, you're not! Put some clothes on."

"Nobody's gonna see me, Mama. I'll dash fer it and be right back!"

She grinned and cocked her head, nodding toward the door, hopin' it was enough to get past her mama and out, damn near indecent. See, she'd made a promise yesterday.

"No way, half-naked girl, are you gonna parade out in your underwear! Put some clothes on."

"It's no different than if I was in a two-piece swimsuit," Saw countered, cupping her hands beneath her half bra.

There wasn't much she could cup in the rest of her attire: that Sosusu cotton G-string thong that might not even count as a rubber band kind of thing. The strap sat low on her hips, a skinny white line diggin' into soft skin. In the mirror, it had looked kinda daring. Under Mama's stare, it just felt like evidence.

"Yeah, it is. Clothes, girlfriend, then the mailbox. Mama's orders!"

The look on her mama's face--the pursed lips, the frown, the wrinkled brow--was a full-on West Texas mama's 'no.'

"Oh, 'kay!"

Saw relented with her signature smirk, knowin' that 'you don't win when you whine', but happy now that her summer could be spent mostly at home, rather than in some nursing facility with sick people.

All she had to do was get Mr. Randy to agree to, and sign off on her work hours. A piece of cake, knowin' he had a fondness for redheads.

He was a nice guy, a bit lonely, and at an age when gadgets like cellphones and new-age AI computers befuddled him. Not that he couldn't work them.

But his current engineering tinkerin' still revolved around his hydraulics, somethin' to do with physics, some widgets, and other wiggle-its. With a basement full of those, he could be lost for hours in designs.

He'd been a wizard at that, according to the conversations between Saw and Mrs. Randy before she passed. Saw missed those afternoon conversations after the school bus dropped her off, when she spent time with Mrs. Randy, until her mama got off work. See, Sara grew up pretty much as a latchkey kid. Left to her own devices mostly.

"Better?" she asked, returnin' with a halter top, poured into jeans, and flip flops. Arms raised and on tiptoes, she spun around the kitchen like a ballerina for her mom's approval.

"Don't forget to take Mr. Randy his mail. Gives you a chance to ask," Sue Ellen nodded, while puttin' the egg salad sandwiches and sweat drippin' glasses of sweet, iced tea on the table.

"Lunch when you get back, darlin'," she hollered after the girl, long gone into the Texas heat, as the screen door slammed shut with a bang.

We Don't Want to Get Crossways of the Law

At the mailboxes, a girl, almost eighteen, and an older man joke about what "legal" means and how birthdays are counted. Beneath the teasing, the chapter sketches its first uneasy questions about desire, technicalities, and where the line really is.

"Sara Anne." Her neighbor nodded.

"Howdy, Mr. Randy. Mail, yet?" she asked, as her eyes met his and then flowed from that silver fox hairstyle, down that bare chest that was covered in a forest of grey-black hair. He stood there barefoot, in his boxers. That's where her eyes landed. He'd kept his promise.

His chest hair had gone salt‑and‑pepper, more salt now. A thick mat that thinned out around a pale surgical scar she'd never noticed before. His belly wasn't flat exactly, but it was the kind of sixty‑five that still hinted at the linebacker he might've been, before gravity and grief had their say.

"Yep," he answered, reachin' into the cavernous box, and retrievin' a plain brown wrapped package. His answer was just the number of words needed. Didn't keep his eyes from meeting hers, though, and roaming her up and down, too.

Sometimes words weren't needed to get across what's on a man's mind or a girl's mind, either for that matter.

"So... I was gonna, but... Mama made me put on these clothes." She sighed apologetically as her arms swept down her jeans while reaching into a smaller mailbox. It didn't seem to be a good enough answer, knowin' what she'd promised him yesterday.

'Ya gonna be in for a real surprise before lunch, Mr. Randy.'

The denim rasped against the backs of her knees as she shifted her weight. A reminder that what had felt bold in front of her bedroom mirror now read differently under an old man's eyes.

"Well, gotta do what Mama says, until yer at least eighteen. Stands to reason," he responded, closin' the bigger box, tuckin' the brown wrapped phone-sized package under his arm.

"Eighteen next week on the thirteenth." The words came out in a gentle whisper, followed by a deep breath, followed by a slow exhale. It sent her breasts rising. His eyes didn't miss that.

"You know, you're really already eighteen?"

Sara Anne's brow rose quizzically. "How so?"

"Well, most people think that they are twelve months old, a year old, twelve months from the day they were born. They forget they gestated for nine months before that. By the time they think they're celebratin' their year of birth, they're really one year and nine months old."

Randy rolled that out like it was one of those golden educational nuggets he'd offer every once in a while.

"Huh... " Sara Anne huffed, letting his words and her newfound knowledge sink in. "So I'm already eighteen and... eight months old and a few days more?" She nodded, roughly calculating the next few days to her birthday.

"Technically, you are," he answered, with a wink.

"Technically. I am then," she said with that trademark impish grin. "That changes the perspective, doesn't it?" she asked.

"Technically," he said, smiling back, "but that's a matter for the law to decide." He finished with a chuckle.

"Well, I guess we don't want to get crossways with the law, do we?" she grinned.

"Not at my age."

"Not at my age either," she answered with one of those red-headed mischievous smiles.

"Mr. Randy, maybe Mama didn't let me come dressed like I promised, but I've some good news, anyways."

Randall Blake smiled, watching her dimple deepen as her face lit up. Those curly red locks bounced above those freckles as she raised on tiptoes with excitement.

The motion hitched her halter up a fraction, a sliver more pale skin flashed between denim and cotton, and his gaze jerked away like the sun had just come out from behind a cloud.

"I got permission from school to... help you as part of my summer community experience! So... we have the whole summer!"

She practically squealed with her good news delivery.

"Help me?" Mr. Randy's brows went up, puzzled.

"Like... with anything, ya know? House stuff, maybe clean your pool, testin' out the divin' board...that kinda stuff... " She smiled wryly.

"Work a little, then maybe work on that all-over tan?" he smirked in reply.

"Ya know, redheads with such fair complexions can't take a lot of sun... all at once," he mused.

"So, maybe I need someone to slather me with sunblock lotion... a lot... all over every inch of my... red parts."

She winked and started to turn back toward the kitchen, where those egg salad sandwiches and cold iced tea her mama had poured awaited them.

"Birthday plans?" he piped up before she got far.

The silver fox's sonorous voice floated up behind her.

Stoppin' midstride, Sara Anne pivoted.

"Mama wants a damned roller-rink party."

Randy's chuckle spilled out as the words rolled hard off her lips. It wasn't hard to see that wasn't settin' well. It didn't take a mind reader to know Mama wanted her girl safe on her eighteenth, not out with girls lookin' for guys.

"And you... want?"

"I'm gonna be eighteen! I should at least get to... feel... a big D." With that, her hand shot over her lips, trying to haul the words back in.

"Sorry!" She blushed.

Heat climbed up from her chest to the tips of her ears, that same heat she'd felt in locker rooms when girls compared notes and someone's eyes lingered a beat too long on her towel gap.

Randy waved it off. He knew the slang, D fer dick, of course.

"How's about you have your friends over for a backyard party, and I open the pool fer y'all?"

"You'd do that?" Her voice rose in surprise.

"Sure. A young lady only turns eighteen and nine months once." He laughed. "But... I don't want my pool filters clogged. Tell your friends not to leave any rubbers in the pool."

Recognition lit up Sara Anne's face as she sensed the playfulness in his voice. Not to be outdone, she cracked, "I'll put out a big bucket labeled, 'Used Rubbers, Please!'"

She laughed and pivoted toward her front door, gone up the driveway like a rabbit leading a hound dog away from her litter. For a girl with a heavy front end, she sure could run. Her flip‑flops slapped on the chert driveway, thighs brushing with each stride, breasts tugging at the thin halter strap with every bounce--a body built for notice, hustlin' like it hoped to outrun it.