Sudden Revisions

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This story is a continuation of theSudden Revisionsseries. I suggest readingChapter 1 ("Ch. 01: Dec 31 to Feb 10")if you have not already. I've changed the naming to better reflect the series chapters going forward. The previous chapter was "Ch. 01: Dec 31 to Feb 10."

This chapter includesbdsm, devotion, infidelity, sexting, shower sex, squirting, slow burn, submission, training, secret, seduction, transformation, and our star's growing enthusiasm as she slowly submits to the man she's texting.

Mar 14 to Mar 19: "Growing Acceptance"

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Mar 14===5:37 amHey, I slept in this morning! Yesterday was really rough. But I'm off to grind those booty gains! Jerry's worried I'm going to look like a man. But I told him Laur's nothing like a man and hot as hell! You think Laura's body is sexy, right? I mean. You have to know it's amazing?

7:30 amWell of course it's fucking early. I am determined to have an amazing peach by this time next year. And if you're lucky.

7:35 amHey. Um. I know I stopped telling you to delete stuff. But I can't help myself sometimes. Please make sure you're deleting most of these. I'd hate to get Laura pissed at you and I'm deleting them so Jerry doesn't see them.

7:36 amIt'll be great to see you when we come down for Easter. I can't wait to see if you can guess what's different with my hair. ;-) xo

8:38 amNaughty boy. I am NOT sending you a selfie so you can guess. Well. Maybe one without the hair so it's still a surprise. But I do want to show you my gym progress. I'll send an update photo to Laur and you can get it off of her phone?

10:45 pmSo since you've been so honest with me about what you like... I just finished fucking Jerry but I faked my orgasm. I'm climbing into the shower right now to finish myself off while I think of... someone else. How should I do it?

11:02 pmI'm not sure. But I think I totally squirted on my hand while I did that. I have never cum on my knees in the shower with my fingers down my throat and up my pussy at the same time. Thank you. I like your instructions.

Mar 15===05:45 amI'm starting my workout but I'll be showering in the women's locker room here. Why don't you tell me how I should do it?

6:08 amOMG. Horndog! I meant how should I shower? But still. Yeah? I went back into the locker room, took the pads out of my sports bra and took off my thong like you told me to. :') >:)

11:20 amOkay. I went back out with my new outfit and had to wait at the Smith Machine for the last 10 minutes while my pussy was soaking wet and my nipples were harder than ever before! Thanks. I'm not kidding. That felt... really good. Does Laura like it when you tell her what to do too?

Mar 16===10:31 pmYes. Sorry. Yes I'm sorry. We don't have to talk about what you do with Laura. I don't mean to beat around the bush with my questions. I am sorry. I feel like I should tell you what the other thing is that I've been working on since I started working out my ass. Then you can punish me with it for being a bad girl.

Mar 18===5:40 amIt's a plug. Yes. And no, it's not a tiny one to go with my cute tiny titties. But there's a bigger one and a toy I'm not ready to put in there if you wanted to make me do that as an apology. God I'm wet just thinking about you telling me what to do. I think I've lost my mind. I don't want my old one back.

6:17 amI don't know. I started thinking about all the different ways a sexier ass could be... more fun? TBH, I hadn't thought about it until I saw you keep checking out Kristi, Meg, and Laur's asses when we were out for Laur's birthday. Now let me get back to my kickbacks before I leak all over myself through these leggings!

7:45 amWell of course! You told me to stop wearing them when I worked out! There are certain weeks that won't be practical, you know. I had two fingers inside myself in the shower just now thinking of what I could do for you when all this work pays off. What is even HAPPENING to me?

4:05 pmSeriously. What IS happening to me? I've barely been able to focus on anything here at work today. All I can think about is what you told me over the phone earlier. OMG just hearing you call me a good girl and a naughty slut almost made me cum on the spot this morning! I. Want. More! #-) <3

10:47 pmI'm kneeling naked on the bathroom floor texting you just like you asked me to do. It-- It feels cold and hard and uncomfortable. But it feels sooo right. Like imagining you here standing over me while I'm doing this is getting me even more wet than what I imagined while Jer was poking at me with his little dick earlier! I feel my heels pressing into my ass right now and can't wait for it to be bigger and stronger. I can't wait to feel more weight pulling my chest forward. I can't wait to have you pulling my hair.

11:35 pmThree times in the shower. I nearly fainted the third time when I imagined it was your cock and hands down there. Jer is still passed out from our session. I'm getting better at making him pop super fast. What are your thoughts on kegels?

Mar 19===5:15 amOMG last night was crazy. I hope getting on my knees for you is that hot in real life. How do we get some time alone this weekend? I'm going to be trying not to leak this morning while I think about kneeling for you in front of Laur and Jerry's family. But OMG wouldn't Laur's sister Meg look blushing at how hot it was? Time to go build that peach for you! :-*

7:40 amShower was faster this morning. I came thinking about you standing over me, Laur AND Meg. Fuck. So hot. I have a bigger plug in this morning. It's closer to how big you said you were when we talked last, but still not quite there. I want you to push me the rest of the way.

8:28 amOkay. I'll be patient and wait for you to give it to me. But seriously. How are we going to get some time together this trip? I don't think I can just sit across the table from you or just sleep down the hall from you all weekend. I'm going to be so wet all the time. Should I figure out how to extend my stay? Send Jer home so I can give up my ass (and everything else) to you?

9:59 amYou telling me to be patient and wait makes it harder for me to be patient and wait. But I'll do it because you said so.

10:15 amOh. I will do ANYTHING "because you say so." I don't know why that's suddenly so easy to say. But yes. Anything. It feels so much better when I hear YOUR voice ask me.

4:56 pmI told Jerry I wanted to stay longer and do some shopping/hanging with Laura after the holiday. Since my job's gone hybrid they're fine with me being remote for a week or so. We'll be driving down anyway, so Jerry just gets to fly back afterwards. I'm working the details out with Laur now and she said she wants to check in with you. We're hopping in the car tonight. I can't wait to see you tomorrow!

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Sudden Revisions will continuein Chapter 4

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